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1. | Introduce the concept of peer editing to students and define the term (i.e., students work with someone their own age-usually someone in the same class-to help improve, revise, and edit a piece of student writing). Brainstorm the pros and cons of peer editing and record students' thoughts about the editing and revising process on chart paper. |
2. | Tell students that they will learn how to peer edit more effectively. Explain that they will look at some samples of student writing. The writing prompt was |
3. | Pass out (or use an overhead transparency) to show the . Read it aloud to students. Explain that there are three steps to peer editing: As you introduce each step, model a few compliments, suggestions, and corrections that you would make on the sample writing piece. |
4. | Start with . Talk about why it is important to give compliments first and the importance of "staying positive." Ask students to brainstorm compliments that they could give for the 5-point writing sample. Some things to look for may include Record students' compliments on the board or have them record them on paper. |
5. | After students have brainstormed compliments, have them move on to the second step— . Ask students to think of suggestions they would make to the author. Students should remember that "put-downs" are not allowed. Remind students that they need to be specific when giving suggestions. For example, "The second sentence in the third paragraph is confusing to me. Maybe you could break it up into two separate sentences." Record students' suggestions on the board. |
6. | Lastly, have students make on the sample by checking for spelling, grammar, and punctuation errors. Depending on the skills and routines in your classroom, you may want to have students use editing marks or simply circle or underline mistakes. |
7. | To end the session, pass out the and quickly review the three steps to peer editing: compliments, suggestions, and corrections. |
1. | Pass out copies of the , and divide the class into small groups of three to four students each. |
2. | Ask students to fold a blank sheet of paper into thirds and label the first column , the second column , and the third column . You may want to have students make corrections (the third step) directly on the writing sample, especially if they are using editing marks. |
3. | Have students work with their group to peer edit the writing sample. They should follow the three steps learned in the previous session: start with compliments, then suggestions, and finally corrections. Remind students to review their notes from the previous session if they get stuck on any step. |
4. | When students are finished, bring the class back together and have the groups share their compliments, suggestions, and corrections. |
1. | Distribute copies of the and have students use the classroom or school computers to open and view the . |
2. | As students move through the PowerPoint tutorial, they should complete the worksheet. |
3. | Collect the worksheets when students are done with the tutorial. |
4. | Bring the class back together to review what they learned about peer editing. |
Start by asking students what they need to remember about the first step—compliments. Guide the class to create one or two checklist items related to compliments. Some ideas might include, "I gave the author of this piece at least two compliments" or "I was specific about what I liked about this piece of writing." Record these student-generated checklist items on the board or on chart paper. Move through the other two steps of peer editing (suggestions and corrections) and generate several other checklist items. Some ideas might include, "I gave the author detailed suggestions about how to improve this piece of writing" or "I marked all the spelling and grammar errors that I saw in this piece of writing." Once students have generated six to seven checklist items, record and type them up. Have students use the checklist as an assessment tool for future peer-editing sessions.
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Students are encouraged to understand a book that the teacher reads aloud to create a new ending for it using the writing process.
While drafting a literary analysis essay (or another type of argument) of their own, students work in pairs to investigate advice for writing conclusions and to analyze conclusions of sample essays. They then draft two conclusions for their essay, select one, and reflect on what they have learned through the process.
If you are looking for ideas in the editing step of the writing process, you are in the right place! This post will provide ways to teach and break down different editing techniques. Although it is part of a series of 30+ writing mini lessons on narrative writing, it can also be used in other types of writing like opinion writing and informative writing.
For this step of the writing process, you will spend several days teaching mini lessons for each letter in CUPS.
When in the revising stage, we “listened” for the errors. With CUPS, we “look” for errors. Get out those magnifying glasses ! Oh yeah! Use magnifying glasses in class to support this step of the writing process. The first mini lesson is introducing CUPS. This acronym will be used all year when editing any writing throughout the year. WHAT IS CUPS?
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Capitals – beginning of the sentence, I, proper nouns, titles, inside quotes.
Usage – subject-verb agreement, double negatives, sentence fragments, run-on sentences, verb forms and tenses, pronoun case forms.
Punctuation – End of sentences, commas in a series, quotations, combine sentences
Spelling Rules –
1. Always put a u after a q. (quack, quiet) 2. Every syllable has a vowel. 3. The “soft” sound of c (s sound) or g (j sound) is usually foll0wed by i, y, or e. (city, gym) 4. Write I before e except after c or when sounded like a. (thief, believe, ceiling, receive, neighbor, weigh) 5. Spelling Rules for Adding Inflectional Endings to Words
Choose a recent story that you read in class. Point out the corrent grade level capitalization, usage, punctuation and spelling.
For CUPS, take your class rough draft and if you didn’t purposely make mistakes while writing it, go back and rewrite it using editing mistakes! Then use a different color pen than used for revising. If you used multiple colors by teaching FAAVS in revising, then choose a different color than the colors in FAAVS or allow students to use multiple colors. Use whatever it takes for students to be excited about editing! During the editing process, have a dictionary available! When modeling, use the dictionary to look up how to spell words! Also have student writing resources available either at the writing center, groups, or individual folders. Model yourself going through the resources to guide you in your editing! You can find a FREE SPELLING DICTIONARY in my store.
Students should take notes on the steps of CUPS and also keep a separate folder for the student resources for CUPS.
Practice will take place with each letter of CUPS in the following mini lessons.
After all of the following mini lessons in CUPS, students should apply it to their own stories.
Follow the next 4 mini lessons for more ideas on CUPS!
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I felt good about life. I taught students how to organize , focus , establish style , and use grammar . I felt so good, I nominated myself for teacher of the year, made fliers, and posted them throughout town. Then I realized my students did not understand the difference between proofreading and editing. I had to act immediately. I canvassed the school, took down all the fliers, rescinded my nomination, and called my wife to tell her I’d be home late.
I had work to do. I had to teach students how to edit an essay.
Students don’t understand what proofreading and editing is. They falsely believe editing involves correcting misspelled words and poor punctuation. That’s called proofreading. Editing involves, eliminating words, restructuring sentences, rearranging material, and clarifying ideas. Once an essay is edited and proofread, it is ready for revision.
English teachers have done a fine job explaining proofreading symbols. These techniques will teach students how to edit an essay for economy.
1. Eliminate unnecessary prepositional phrases:
Example: Sharks of a predatory nature
Edited: Predatory sharks
2. Eliminate redundant modifiers:
Example: impoverished homeless
Edited: homeless
3. Eliminate adjectives that describe the obvious:
Example: meaningful memories, loud screams
Edited: memories, screams
4. Get rid of the unnecessary that, which, or who:
Example: I know that retirement is important.
Edited: I know retirement is important.
5. Cross out the unnecessary articles:
Example: Be sure to tell the students not to chew gum.
Edited: Be sure to tell students not to chew gum.
1. Assign a 1,000 word essay. Emphasize it must be at least 1,000 words. It must be done on a word processor.
2. A week after collecting it (this will give time for absent students to get it done), tell them to edit their 1,000 word essay to 600 words.
3. Begin by looking at sections or paragraphs they could eliminate or combine.
4. Continue by looking at sentences and clauses they could eliminate or combine.
5. Finally, instruct them to use the techniques above.
6. Assessment should include not only the quality of writing, but the ability to deliver the same main idea in 600 words that they previously delivered in 1,000 words.
7. For practice on editing for word economy, use the paragraph below.
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Below is the 6-step process for how to teach editing: 1. Start with clear guidelines when editing. Before diving into editing practice, provide your students with clear guidelines and objectives. Explain that there are four main edits you will focus on: Punctuation. Capitalization. Sense. Spelling.
Students are introduced to a three-step strategy for peer editing, providing (1) compliments, (2) suggestions, and (3) corrections in response to a sample of student writing. They practice these steps in a small-group session and share the results with the class. Then they move to individual editing practice guided by a PowerPoint tutorial and ...
Introduction. (5 minutes) Display a sample of student writing and ask students to make observations about the writing. Ask the students: "What do you notice?". Tell the students that they will be learning how to revise and edit their work with their peers using compliments, suggestions, and questions. Download to read more.
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