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In this section, Prof. Haynes Miller and Susan Ruff describe the criteria for good mathematical writing and the components of the writing workshop .
A central goal of the course is to teach students how to write effective, journal-style mathematics papers. Papers are a key way in which mathematicians share research findings and learn about others’ work. For each research project, each student group writes and revises a paper in the style of a professional mathematics journal paper. These research projects are perfect for helping students to learn to write as mathematicians because the students write about the new mathematics that they discover. They own it, they are committed to it, and they put a lot of effort into writing well.
In the course, we help students learn to write papers that communicate clearly, follow the conventions of mathematics papers, and are mathematically engaging.
Communicating clearly is challenging for students because doing so requires writing precisely and correctly as well as anticipating readers’ needs. Although students have read textbooks and watched lectures that are worded precisely, they are often unaware of the care with which each word or piece of notation was chosen. So when students must choose the words and notation themselves, the task can be surprisingly challenging. Writing precisely is even more challenging when students write about insights they’re still developing. Even students who do a good job of writing precisely may have a different difficulty: providing sufficient groundwork for readers. When students are deeply focused on the details of their research, it can be hard for them to imagine what the reading experience may be like for someone new to that research. We can help students to communicate clearly by pointing out places within the draft at which readers may be confused by imprecise wording or by missing context.
For most students, the conventions of mathematics papers are unfamiliar because they have not read—much less written—mathematics journal papers before. The students’ first drafts often build upon their knowledge of more familiar genres: humanities papers and mathematics textbooks and lecture notes. So the text is often more verbose or explanatory than a typical paper in a mathematics journal. To help students learn the conventions of journal papers, including appropriate concision, we provide samples and individualized feedback.
Finally, a common student preconception is that mathematical writing is dry and formal, so we encourage students to write in a way that is mathematically engaging. In Spring 2013, for example, one student had to be persuaded that he did not have to use the passive voice. In reality, effective mathematics writing should be efficient and correct, but it should also provide motivation, communicate intuition, and stimulate interest.
To summarize, instruction and feedback in the course address many different aspects of successful writing:
To help students learn to write effective mathematics papers, we provide various resources, a writing workshop, and individualized feedback on drafts.
Various resources are provided to help students learn effective mathematical writing.
The following prize-winning journal article was annotated to point out various conventions and strategies of mathematical writing. (Courtesy of Mathematical Association of America. Courtesy of a Creative Commons BY-NC-SA license.)
An Annotated Journal Article (PDF)
This document introduces the structure of a paper and provides a miscellany of common mistakes to avoid.
Notes on Writing Mathematics (PDF)
The following PDF, TeX, and Beamer samples guide students to present their work using LaTeX, a high-quality typesetting system designed for the production of technical and scientific documentation. The content in the PDF and TeX documents highlights the structure of a generic student paper.
Sample PDF Document created by pdfLaTeX (PDF)
Sample TeX Document (TEX)
Beamer template (TEX)
The following resources are provided to help students learn and use LaTeX.
LaTeX-Project. “ Obtaining LaTeX .” August 28, 2009.
Downes, Michael. “Short Math Guide for LaTeX.” (PDF) American Mathematical Society . Version 1.09. March 22, 2002.
Oetiker, Tobias, Hubert Partl, et al. “The Not So Short Introduction to LaTeX 2ε.” (PDF) Version 5.01. April 06, 2011.
Reckdahl, Keith. “Using Imported Graphics in LaTeX and pdfLaTeX.” (PDF) Version 3.0.1. January 12, 2006.
Each semester there is a writing workshop, led by the lead instructor, which features examples to stimulate discussion about how to write well. In Spring 2013, Haynes ran this workshop during the third class session and used the following slide deck, which was developed by Prof. Paul Seidel and modified with the help of Prof. Tom Mrowka and Prof. Richard Stanley.
The 18.821 Project Report (PDF)
This workshop was held before students had begun to think about the writing component of the course, and it seemed as if the students had to be reminded of the lessons of the workshop when they actually wrote their papers. In future semesters, we plan to offer the writing workshop closer to the time that students are drafting their first paper. We may also focus the examples used in the workshop on the few most important points rather than a broad coverage.
This video features the writing workshop from Spring 2013 and includes instruction from Haynes as well as excerpts of the class discussion.
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In this section, Prof. Haynes Miller and Susan Ruff describe how students receive feedback on their writing and what is expected from students during the revision process.
Feedback and revision are critical to students’ development as mathematical writers in the course. For each project, each student team is required to write a first draft, meet with course instructors for a debriefing meeting, make revisions, and submit a final draft. This process provides an opportunity for a mid-project check-in about the students’ writing as well as their research, and it pushes them to produce a stronger final draft than what most could have managed on their own.
In the best situations, a team’s first draft represents the students’ best efforts but is still somewhat rough; we give them lots of feedback for reworking their paper, and their final draft is substantially clearer and more rigorous, well-motivated, and technically precise. In our experience, each subsequent paper is typically better than the one before.
After a team submits its first draft, the team’s mentor for that project, and sometimes Haynes and sometimes Susan, reads the paper and crafts feedback. First drafts typically have plenty of room for improvement. We try not to overwhelm students with a huge number of comments; commenting on everything often leads to students getting lost in the details and unable to distinguish the most important points from more trivial points. Instead, we draw attention to the most important things for the students to improve. We try to craft constructive comments so that, rather than being discouraged, students will be inspired to revise. Sometimes a second round of revision is necessary. This whole process is quite like the refereeing process for journal articles.
Students receive feedback on their draft at a team debriefing meeting, which usually occurs several days after the first draft is submitted. Sharing feedback via the debriefing meeting provides two key advantages:
Most students take the debriefing sessions very seriously. They do not see our feedback on their work beforehand, and they are naturally curious and may be somewhat anxious, especially the first time. The face-to-face interaction always helps to frame suggestions in a constructive manner, and students almost never respond defensively. They generally listen attentively and make a sincere effort to respond to our critiques.
Immediately after the debriefings, we scan the marked-up papers and send an electronic copy to the team members. The final draft is typically due a week after the debriefing, giving students time to think about research extensions of their work and to improve their writing.
One of the things we look for in papers for the course is consistency of voice and notation among sections written by different team members. We encourage the students to help each other revise.
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To illustrate the writing and revision process for the student papers, two sample projects are presented below.
This project developed from the project description for Number Squares (PDF) . To view the practice presentation and final presentation from this team of students, see the Sample Student Presentations page.
The student work is courtesy of Yida Gao, Matt Redmond, and Zach Steward. Used with permission.
This video features the debriefing meeting for the first draft of Sample Paper 1. The student team first presents their findings, and then the course instructors offer feedback and discuss the mathematics and the writing for the project.
This project developed from the project description for Tossing a Coin (PDF) .
The student work is courtesy of Jean Manuel Nater, Peter Wear, and Michael Cohen. Used with permission.
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Types of Writing in Mathematics. As an undergraduate mathematics student, you will probably need to write short answers, proofs, papers of varying lengths, and/or a more extensive research paper with an abstract. You might also need to compose a summary poster or a ten-minute oral presentation supported by slides.
The following books, articles, and websites contain short writing assignments. Stephen Maurer’s Undergraduate Guide to Writing Mathematics has an extensive appendix of writing exercises designed to target various aspects of writing mathematics. Writing Projects for Mathematics Courses: Crushed Clowns, Cars, and Coffee to Go, by A Crannell et ...
When you write in a math class, you are expected to use correct grammar and spelling. Your writing should be clear and professional. Do not use any irregular abbreviations or shorthand forms which do not conform to standard writing conventions. Mathematics is written with sentences in paragraphs.
This booklet is about writing mathematics at university. At pre-university level a lot of mathematics involves writing down a sequence of equations, a number or function appears at the bottom of the page and you get a tick or a cross depending on whether you are right or wrong.
All mathematics should be written in complete sentences. Open any mathe-matics text and you’ll see that this is true. Equations, even displayed ones, have punctuation that help you see where it fits in the context of a larger sentence. Consider this piece of writing: (x 2)2 + (x 1)2 = 52 52 = 25.
In this section, Prof. Haynes Miller and Susan Ruff describe the criteria for good mathematical writing and the components of the writing workshop. A central goal of the course is to teach students how to write effective, journal-style mathematics papers.